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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2005-05-11 06:43 PM

deny...

in muffle of a
scream... the
churning
yearn of
beg...
reprieve
forget
regret
no turning
back in
lack of
understand of

this

a kiss to
weary
wrinkled brow... and
inward screams the
sigh of
'how?'... and
wanting, taunting
haunt of
'why?'... and
what will ever
never be

again

a tear... of
overflow
erupts
volcanic in the
know of
sacrifice... a
virgin bleeds the
emptiness
remaining

here

in echo of

a muted

SCREAM...

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2005-05-11 06:46 PM

hey lady? You been hanging around on my cloud again?

(tsk...not a nice place these days you.

)

Now have a hug and nodding, you write the power, sweetie.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2005-05-11 06:51 PM

"hey lady? You been hanging around on my cloud again?"

More than you know, Karen...

This did not come from 'me'...

Love you, my sis...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-05-11 06:53 PM

Vicky this is outstanding writing and I love the rhyme and flow of it.
Deeply intense writing hon. Much enjoyed.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-05-11 07:02 PM

It's good to see you Vicky!

"virgin bleeds the
emptiness
remaining

here

in echo of

a muted

SCREAM..."

Not muted, at all...but loud and clear!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

5 posted 2005-05-11 07:26 PM

Truly enjoyed the reading of this my friend.

jwesley

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-05-11 08:14 PM

No, Vicky...

this did not come
from you...

but it has come
from those
you care for...

from those you see...

from those
you hear...

even when you don't know
them.

I rarely lay this word
on a poem,
but

yes,

awesome, my friend...

and thank you
for the depth.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2005-05-11 11:33 PM

Very moving piece Vicky. Well done. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2005-05-16 07:49 PM

i sense a bit of serenity within the inward screams.

Very moving Vicky, am loving your style lately.

mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2005-05-17 04:23 AM

God, Vic, I saw Judas and Jesus . . .

What're ya doin' ta me?

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-05-17 04:26 AM

enjoyed~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2005-05-18 09:18 PM

wow Vicky...this is so touching

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2005-05-18 11:07 PM

Those inward screams have got to come out! I have let loose in my linen closet with my face buried in linens yelling my head off!

Then I say, "Aww! Now I feel better!"

Mount Vesuvius has to blow its top once in a while!

However, you did a fine job of letting off some steam with this emotive write!

Sending you a warm, loving hug ~ and some linens!

Linda

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