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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2005-05-11 04:48 PM


Melody,
Sing to me songs so sweetly,
Hear notes fall
As they call,
Floating here to there freely,
Enticing,
Delighting,
The whole audience and me.
Sing along
With the song,
Eyes closed lets the ears to see,
Melody,
Sounds that surrounds in beauty.

Gloom

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-05-11 04:54 PM


Nicely done Proff, a beautiful melody I can hear playing..
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-05-11 04:55 PM


sounds enticing to me~~~
speaking of singing ..I have been the Music teacher for 2 days...poor kids

M

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
3 posted 2005-05-11 06:52 PM


Very, very nice, professor!  I've been playing at the piano lately, but the keys have been a hammering (or is it the hammers have been a keying?) In either case, your poem is much sweeter than my sonatas!   Enjoyed a bunch.  Thanks.
                 ~miscellanea

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2005-05-11 07:30 PM


enjoyed.

j.

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