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Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2005-05-11 01:38 PM

I use this pen   to lace the page
with traces of you from my mind
The smile it brings to hold you
Intoxicated from breathing
the sensual smells of your hair    and perfume
The peace it brings my wayward soul
to feel your gentle touch
   upon my face
The explosions of feelings
when our lips press
And the countless times i've found myself
Lost     in your beautiful eyes
Leaveing me wanting
to know everything they hold    and perceive
The joy it brings me to see
your face light up with a smile
when you see me
or when i make you laugh
The safety i feel when you're around
because i know you love me
   for who i am.
The closeness i feel    knowing
i love even your faults
because a much bigger package came with it
And the pleasure i feel
because you know i'm here for you
like you have been for me
written 5-31-04@ 1 a.m.

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
-Godsmack
"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
-unknown

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-05-11 01:51 PM

It is wonderful when we know we are loved for who we are. Very nicely done, I enjoyed your write very much.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-05-11 01:52 PM

Well done...very much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2005-05-11 02:07 PM

WHat a sweat poem! Oh. what a lucky girl.

-JUju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

4 posted 2005-05-12 12:01 PM

thank you for the comments. She may have been a lucky girl, but i wasn't nearly such a lucky guy. But i still love this piece nonetheless

" How can i feel if i can't breathe...?"
-Godsmack
"If who i am is what i have, and what i have is lost...then who am i?"
(I Ride The Short Bus)

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