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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-05-11 04:48 AM


Once Upon A Dream


'Twas A dream,
One of many colors and schemes,
That filled my day with thoughts,
Thoughts of our conversations,
And our in betweens,

Your words, your mischevious laughter,
How my mind has savored every word spoken,
Today, tomorrow, tonight, my mind will hold
them as memory tokens,

Words conveyed, deeply felt,
To make my mind ponder,
My heart to melt,

As we danced to conversations tune,
I closed my eyes and envisioned,
Every fleeting moment that ended to soon,
So My heart deeply listened,
As my face glistened,

I could see in my minds eye,
You and I,
A romantic spring night,
Italian boat ride with wine,
Beautiful view in sight,

Sunset on a warm, breezy spring evening,
Your hand interlocked inside mine,
Gently squeezing,like a heart beating, in perfect time,

During the boat ride across the lake,
You and I share our life stories,
Open our hearts,share our biggest mistakes,

Closer we become,
As the night moves on,
To dinner, A play,

You have a way,
How you take me on journeys without a car,
With you I feel I can reach the stars,

Go to the ends of the earth,
To mars,without lifting a finger,
How I want these thoughts to linger,

What is this magic, this mystery,
This chemistry I feel?
For there is something connecting us,
Something touchable, real,

I open my eyes,
To realize,
Across the distance,
To where you are,
I am here, you are there,
This dream is what we share,

Our souls now connect,
With no in betweens,
I feel you are real,
Our hearts express what the other heart means,

You have forever captivated me...
"Once Upon A Dream"

One question is all I ask,
Will this dream forever be a dream?
Can it become real?
Don't let our moment pass,
Let us create at last,

A Dream we can touch and feel happily everafter!!!

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Goldenrose
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1 posted 2005-05-11 06:29 AM


To have dreams like these is all anybody needs in this life...enjoyed reading...

Goldenrose.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

Startime55
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2 posted 2005-05-11 10:10 AM


A dream filled with the passions of romance...A pure joy to read and envision...

MyHeartofShadows
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Hyattsville, MD
3 posted 2005-05-11 02:53 PM


Touching my memories of dreams that wishes of yesterdays in my tomorrow.

Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2005-05-11 02:54 PM


I liked this one.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-05-11 03:00 PM


Beautiful write filled with romance.  Well done.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2005-05-11 03:03 PM


"I know you I walked with you..
Once upon a dream..."
Sleeping Beauty Waltz?

What would life be like without our dreams?
Beautiful piece of writing here m'dear.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2005-05-11 07:53 PM


Beautiful...many are looking for the one that share the same dream...James
CastleGuard
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8 posted 2005-05-12 02:37 AM


Truly a romantic and beautiful dream, ARH.

Once upon a dream -
When night befriends a day
I know I couldn’t say
Such dream I didn’t dream...

CG

MGROVES
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california
9 posted 2005-05-12 04:19 AM


romance is always a joy
to read and to feel the music
of the heart

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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