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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-05-10 11:49 PM



You took me for a ride
you self rigious whore
you took my soul and
slamed it into the door


Your eyes how they beam
crimson as you spin your
lies upon my very being
capturing me like a spider
gets it's flies

Come into my pallor you say
let me take you away from
all your dismay for I care
for you.


All I want to do is get
over you to have someone
hurt me so is beyound my
comprehension I just
want to deem you into
dementions

For you are a heartless soul
that my heart weeps endlessly
for you know the score yet you
still pursued me....

You really dident want
nothing to do with me

Gold star for you
you fooled me!
I took care of you
and helped you

I never took advantaged but
I pulled through you strung me
like a some poor pup on a leash


I don't begrudge you but want to
embrace you for I still see those
cold blue listless eyes I am
your black angel

© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2005-05-12 12:44 PM


Hmmm....

I think this is a good poem,  I didn't get what you meant until I read it again and then it made since.....  hehehhe..... your just as dirty as me kinda poem.... love it.

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2005-05-12 01:24 PM


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