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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-05-10 01:20 PM





~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

© Copyright 2005 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
kayjay
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1 posted 2005-05-10 01:24 PM


Each soul needs such a place or at least to know that such exists.  I'm glad you told me of yours, I'm still buidling mine.  
Beautifully written.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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2 posted 2005-05-10 01:36 PM


Thanks for sharing your special place...and the words that spring from here.

Eric

Martie
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3 posted 2005-05-10 02:02 PM


Marge/sis

It is lovely!!  I would love to walk along that space some day, with you!  

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4 posted 2005-05-10 02:10 PM


Dear Marge:  Such a lovely and enchanted place!  I am lucky enough to have one very like it!

Love
Betty Lou

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5 posted 2005-05-10 02:17 PM


Oh darn, this reminds me of where I used to live and the back yard that led into the forest...

oh dear, thank you for such a beautiful memory today...
Hugs

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6 posted 2005-05-10 02:47 PM


Ah Marge..this is a wonderful scene.
How I would love to take a walk down that path today..
Lovely this..
Lovely you.
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

Betty
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7 posted 2005-05-10 03:05 PM


Beautiful
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8 posted 2005-05-10 03:08 PM


wow......wow....makes my desert beg for a drink of water and my thoughts beg for heaven
NewEnglandlazurlu
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9 posted 2005-05-10 05:45 PM


Oh, how beautiful. I would love to stroll in your meadow with you and think of the poems we would come up with!  

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-05-10 05:48 PM


Marge,
Just beautiful, beautiful.

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11 posted 2005-05-10 07:12 PM


Dear Marge,
Thank you for allowing me a little glimpse, it suits you beautifully.

Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2005-05-10 09:27 PM



I remember the Spanish moss high in the tree
Like lace it filtered the light of Sun you see
I walked across that meadow several times
It's been the subject of so many rhymes

Byond those trees began a different world
And in those trees grew little grapes all twirled
Each color green of Heaven's palet one could find
Your meadow brings good memories to my mind

Titia




Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

MGROVES
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13 posted 2005-05-11 04:16 AM


gorgeous, inspirational at best~
a poetic vision of serenity~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Startime55
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14 posted 2005-05-11 10:19 AM


No wonder you are so inspired...just seeing this place of tranquil beauty filled my heart with the desire to write...I love it...**hugs**

LeeJ
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15 posted 2005-05-11 12:30 PM


oh boy, is it any wonder?  How precious and few....what an escape of your own personal being...now I understand where your heart words come from...not to mention, those lovely grandchildren of yours....

Hugs lady, thanks so much for sharing this

Margherita
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16 posted 2005-05-15 06:27 AM


Oh, I hear the trees whispering through the monitor!
This is a place of great inspirational power, dear Marge.
Thank you for sharing it with us!
Love and hugs.
Margherita

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