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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-05-10 07:02 AM



ass faults the asphalt
like ping pong balls
do a dodgeball game
with red lights
on a wet sock morning
over highway one o' one
before two

and I was there again
just as a coffee man
in an old shoes sky
with too much time
for the barefoot dreams
that got lost in the room
with too many windows

that needed cleaning
before the sun can come
but she is always late
and anyway my metal
has always been
at her neon
before the electic

became her default turn on


______________
dark

(scribblenote:  it is all between the lines this time)



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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-05-10 07:57 AM


It is, what it is...isn't it..?  Hugs

funny, human nature?  

smiles to ya, for a wonderful day...
you are indeed an artist of God's making...

Wonderfully written

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-05-10 08:37 AM


your images and visions make me smile buddie...
good morning big guy!

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-05-10 08:41 AM


and I was there again
just as a coffee man
in an old shoes sky
with too much time
for the barefoot dreams
that got lost in the room
with too many windows

~*~

Oh, what you see in those early hours...

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-05-10 10:18 AM


smiling at you this morning D -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
5 posted 2005-05-10 11:44 AM


DS

Just "old shoe sky" made this poem worth reading, but the whole between the lines poem, wonderful, as always!  

Indigo
Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

6 posted 2005-05-10 12:07 PM


Dear D-

Pretty soon you'll have no need for mortal conversations... your thoughts will channel directly into the universe, absorbed through the skin in a slow push fix.  Those who take off all their clothes will get the maximum exposure. *weg*

Indigo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
7 posted 2005-05-10 09:50 PM


well then god turn me into an apostrophe so i could be squeezed in somewhere between your lines
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