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Jonathan
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since 2005-05-04
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Paris

0 posted 2005-05-09 09:46 AM



WORLD WITH NO WORD DISEASE


I, dot, did score on ocean floor
you too were dot, no more,
we'd LOOP the LOOP in primaeval soup
and POOL gene POOL core corps.
We'd POLO here and POLO for
none then knew one could droop,
we'd twin and grin to win encore
no sin there was, no law !

I'd bow, you'd stoop, with helluva whoop -
no care and no dis....pair,
above, below, we'd group, regroup
all with no 'mal[e] de mer'.
Amino here, ah me ! know there
was troop on troop on troop, -
we'd pair, repair, again prepare
see sea combine with air.

We'd twirl, we'd whirl, like a hoola-hoop
around, around some more,
in tune to moon as cock-a-hoop
we'd twin, to spin restore.
Off shore we'd spore, to sink or soar,
linked chain remained Time's dupe
neath starry dome in mono chrome,
no after, no before !

We'd skirl, we'd swirl, up, down would curl,
ages of practised ease,
we'd furl, unfurl, in endless whorl -
world with no word disease,
when I was girl and you my pearl, -
no men, to bend, no knees, -
no need but feed we all agreed
to speed on pretty please !

Though question begs, we had no legs,
nor sought to understand, -
we were the dregs from which all pegs
its story book to hand.
We by degrees, through fire and freeze
rose from a twisting band
to all one sees through seven seas
in water, air, and land.

LAYER would RELAY by night and day
Y REAL anticipate,
in reel we'd feel we'd feel - this way
all did participate.
An ONION here ON I ON sphere
ionosphere above
no chronosome, no chronos - home
was there - with all in love.

We'd dance to chance as all advance
tomorrow WAS today,
electrons free charged you and me
with mission key to play
from cause/effect to Man erect -
elected some would say -
but Man's a phase, an empty phrase
on evolution's way.


My coil with toil from sea to soil
rose from primaeval beach,
the tide we'd ride - some turned to oil -
to show there's reach in each
to change arrange - styles passing strange -
despite new Kansas preach.
The basic code stays à la mode
the generations teach ...


One could flow on but some upon
Networks' attention span
feel overdone more words than one
when ego dares to scan.
Feel for 'such stuff' four lines enough -
where they applause would pay -
So well fold our tents' and at all events
swift, silently steal away ...


Life : A finite succession of infinite opportunities

Poetry : Open sharing of individual ability to channel creative soul-song AWAY from the ego

© Copyright 2005 Jonathan Robin - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2005-05-10 09:06 AM


Magnificent word play...that brought the ocean of emotion to new depths.
Bravo.
TD

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