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ctowen
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0 posted 2005-05-08 01:03 PM


in the beginning,
before time's start
buried away in a corner
of my heart
was a lonely place,
unheard ...
unseen ...

but now been touched
in away, ever so mean

given to life, a light
of warmth and healings
the food of heart ...

growth of our feelings

like any seed
your smile releases
young love,
now looking
to us to raise above

any growing situation ...

the parents of
Love's Creation


"In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living."
  

© Copyright 2005 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
1 posted 2005-05-08 01:20 PM


wonderful write C


inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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2 posted 2005-05-08 04:06 PM


glimmers of hope shining through the words
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-05-08 04:26 PM


nicely written C...hope you are well. Like the newer picture

M

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2005-05-08 05:30 PM


quote:
like any seed
your smile releases
young love,
now looking
to us to raise above

any growing situation ...

the parents of
Love's Creation




Very beautifully expressed.

Love, Margherita

rosepetals25
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5 posted 2005-05-11 02:14 PM


It has been a long time since I've read you! I'm glad I went to the second page of posts and found this one.

Tara

"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."    -Friedrich Nietzsche

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-05-11 02:43 PM


This is a lovely heart spill Craig. Well done.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
7 posted 2005-05-12 01:32 AM


Love does indeed, rise above, so far beyond and away.

You write so nice, Craig~

Startime55
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8 posted 2005-05-12 12:58 PM


I feel your tender touch in each word filled with the hope that love will overcome...I can tell you that it does...**big hugs** my friend...your words touch the heart as usual...I hope you are well...

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