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Juju
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In your dreams

0 posted 2005-05-07 05:21 PM



Until I am dust


Alone, because I am all that I am
And shattered like an old porcelain doll
I will walk alone today down this hall
I will crumble like the earth beneath me
I will be swept away by the blue sea
Until I stop breathing I can still fight
All the monsters under my bed at night
My life is no game so I wish to strive
I may be weak, but I am still Alive


-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-05-07 05:35 PM


what hope I see in this!

this hits home for me...I can relate

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-05-07 05:53 PM


Very well written and much enjoyed.
Hugs~N.

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2005-05-07 07:30 PM


Beautifully alive I would say!

Powerful write!

Love, Margherita

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2005-05-07 07:44 PM


Nice...James
pharon
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alabama
5 posted 2005-05-07 07:47 PM


because you are alive you are not weak -- good poem
Juju
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In your dreams
6 posted 2005-05-07 11:22 PM


Thank you all for your responces.


(:

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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7 posted 2005-05-08 10:23 PM


power  here

`

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Juju
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In your dreams
8 posted 2005-05-09 07:01 PM


Thank you


-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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