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Open Poetry #35

As Fingers Tred

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2005-05-07 11:17 AM

Is a stillness of a darkened moon, lingering
in a cool night sky...falling effortlessly toward
a calming dawn...catching a lover’s eye.

Is where a flowery bloom touches, where
dunes of flowing winds caress, where
laughter echoes against a loon's cry...
And owls nestle the trees.

Oh...but to feel the sauntering winds
that wash and sooth and calm...
That bring to thought a dream’s
amend...and chant a weathered psalm.

And whence the stem no longer bends
upon the flower red...two hearts shall
beat as one which sends...a wish as
fingers tred.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2005-05-07 11:31 AM

Such tenderness...so difficult to convey for most...but somehow, you do.
TD

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2005-05-07 11:35 AM

Oh my...A vision of romance that no heart can ignore...The gentle flow of your words are like a lovers caress under the warmth of a summer moon...Ah you make me wax poetic...well done, my friend...**big hugs**

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-05-07 06:15 PM

Barry, you are one of the few that renew my faith in men

beautiful writing

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-05-07 06:26 PM

"And whence the stem no longer bends
upon the flower red...two hearts shall
beat as one which sends...a wish as
fingers tred."

Soft sighs can be heard coming from Canada.
Hugs to you Barry.

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

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