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0 posted 2005-05-07 03:11 AM



"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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1 posted 2005-05-07 03:13 AM


wow, you always do this soooo beautifully!
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2 posted 2005-05-07 03:17 AM


There are times in life and lust, when satisfaction is simply ability. And oh I shake my head and smile, knowing the completion at the beginning of touch, and the journey which that promises.

Absolutely beautiful presentation, and perfect complement, words to the visual.

Can you tell that I liked?

I did. I did.

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3 posted 2005-05-07 03:28 AM


..... i do believe i've found someone else who understands the journey....but, i'm not surprised it was you.


thank you both for reading me.

"i close my eyes and gather up the puddle of this life, one teaspoon at a time, into a bucket with holes" ~me an excerpt from "she still sees ugly"

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4 posted 2005-05-07 08:59 AM


You have a very special talent lady snow
and I enjoy the depth of your works.  
You keep writing, and I will be here reading.     Hugs hon.

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5 posted 2005-05-07 09:12 AM


dang

just wow!

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6 posted 2005-06-17 09:09 AM


A challenge from Ed -- spend a moment today, thinking about how we should treat a good person who is one of PiP's finest poets....if not this one, then one of your choice....it seems we need to.
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