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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2005-05-06 11:52 PM


so this is what life has been reduced to?
the passing car
is the only sound you've heard in days
because everything
oh everything seems like a blur
and your eyes are coated over
from the hours you've spent crying
sweetie,
wake up.

life isn't yours
till you take it
fate can't do everything
so why don't you dry your eyes
and find out if the sun is out today
then maybe you'll hear the world
and everything it is.

this is the moment
this is it
you've got it right in your hands
just open them up
and let it breathe
so you can breathe
and not feel so...without
like you always do
sweetie,
wake up.


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-05-07 09:36 AM


quote:
life isn't yours
till you take it
fate can't do everything
so why don't you dry your eyes
and find out if the sun is out today
then maybe you'll hear the world
and everything it is.



Whoever you are talking to, I hope he hears, for your words are so wise and beautiful!

Love, Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2005-05-07 09:37 AM


beautiful
Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2005-05-07 10:13 AM


Indeed your words are filled with wisdom...I hope that wisdom brings light of laughter to the eyes of the one you write for...**hugs**

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