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First Kiss
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First Kiss |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
out of the shadows and back in again - first kiss touch for touch after lip brushes lip what's left to fear? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was darling...enjoyed, happy weekend to ya Beks |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Beki, this delightful little poem just brought back the night of my first kiss. I was excited that this boy I adored asked me to a dance. While at the dance he stepped on one of my new shoes and broke the strap. Then when he spun me around his arm bashed my nose and it began to bleed down my brand new dress! On the walk to my home we walked over some ice and I broke through it into a puddle of icy water that went over the top of my boots. He then took me to a laundromat and put them in a dryer and ruined, yes, my brand new boots! When we finally got to my house, there was that awkward moment of "is he or isn't he" ~ "will she or won't she"... Anyhoo, as we stood "in the shadows", this hunk of a 6'5" guy leaned down (but not far enough!!!) and he planted a big juicy one right on my nose! lol Meanwhile, my dog and its new litter of puppies where at the window along side of the front door, yipping and barking their cute litte heads off. Then when my date opened the door for me to go in, all the puppies raced out. Then my parents turned on the lights and came outside! ~ Oh, it was sooooo romantic! lol Your poem brought it all back to me!  Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very lovely Beki! LOL@EarthAngel's response.  Hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
Thanks LeeJ and NAncy - and Linda - what a fantastic story! So glad my poem brought back that wonderful memory and thanks so much for sharing it with us! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think we all remember our first kiss thanks for the memory |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just lovely. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Beki, it would be so much fun to read of other readers' first kiss as well! Pucker up for safety! ~ Or is that "buckle up for safety!" lol Linda |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Beki~ I loved the lovely of this thought~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!! An innocent beginning that will can only evolve...Ah such memories this wonderful poem brings to mind...Well done.. |
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