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sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
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0 posted 2005-05-06 11:41 AM



Two Seperate Lives
So distant but so wanting to become one
To touch and smell each's existance
to feel the presence
like the warmth of the sun

Lost by the distance
Forgotten in time
The days roll together
Just trying to make a dime

Trapped in society's weight
struggling to become Onesself
Fighting to make a difference
In this unbearable hell

It keeps me going jusy knowing
Knowing that out there
In the world..Somewhere
There's someone searching

Searching for the one
The one we can have comfort with
Be open with
Tell all our tales too

Searching for that Inner Beauty
That shines as brite as the sun
Makes you blind at the very sight
If only it were you

Sim0riah



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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2005-05-06 03:41 PM


Richard this was beautiful, bumping it, for it deserves more replys...

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA
2 posted 2005-05-06 04:03 PM


Thanks ARH

I appreciate that.

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
Posts 980
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3 posted 2005-05-06 07:11 PM


**smiling**

This is great!! So true.

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