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Re[captured]Newed [Come, Muses]
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Re[captured]Newed [Come, Muses] Some fingerling of sense touched me as thresholds were crossed… This, is yours… Vacant, no sense of Identity, yet fill the rooms some voices said, Here, where, Basic earth colors permeate most areas, color them with your life… and I chuckle to a private me, for only in reserve do I wear Mardi Gras colors but an old wallflower girl is speaking… to these spirits of the home. Caveat – Buyer Beware… a child that grew within some less found more in love of heart until….here Here she will grow…. Near she will know…. imaginings that come true… Disneyland is not redundant…. for she is dizzy in this land…come, Oz…. transport Dorothy to her Given home. Come, dreams… come fulfill the magic of more…. Come, muses….lift with music, fulfill…arts…with moments of time, and all sequined by magic! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, I hear the call, dear Karilea, and I want to cross that threshold and color the rooms ... A magical invitation! Dreams dance in the air we breathe them into our hearts to start fulfillment * * * Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very inspiring! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That magic was waiting all those eons to exist...but it needed you for that, and you weren't there yet. Now you are. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Come, muses….lift with music, fulfill…arts…with moments of time, and all sequined by magic! Wonderful...just wonderful Karilea! Keepin it!!  ChrislanePoetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
BRAVA lovely writing mom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You have strewn many a petal on my path. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
for not the muse . . . FORLORN! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Where would we be without you, and your magical muse and pen...write on....  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
International Union of Muses, Local #28, shop steward reporting for duty, ma'am. G reports you are doing well and coming into your own with a wonderful sense and warmth in your writing. It shows in all you touch. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie The magic was there all along, within you!  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You've always written so wonderfully, I love your poems... Ya know! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Basic earth colors permeate most areas, color them with your life…" This is it, this is why poetry is so important To me..it explains how humans and earth are joined by a sort of marriage. Other words could not have said it better. "Come, dreams… come fulfill the magic of more…." Indeed, dreams are needed, only the "magic of more" can nurture the poets mind, and keep it supple, especially when a hard skin begins to form on the circles of our lives... Thank you, Kari The hues of this poem are those of earth colors, but its effect is as bright as the Mardi Gras... ----------ice/ford ><> |
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