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Enchantress
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0 posted 2005-05-05 03:09 PM






'Head up, shoulders back..
       pause
listen for your cue..
       and   smile!'

You were always there
in the wings   reminding us to smile.

hocus pocus..flowers from the air
    abracadabra
              bow to the fanfare!

give them a smile..a bow and a wink
little sisters    young and tiny                                            
god what did people think?                              

'don't look so nervous! '  
..but   but, the rabbit...oh no!
it didn't appear
the top    on the prop
....stuck!

smile

for my next trick...

that's when it all started
the anxiety, panic and fear
'now, don't let it show..girls,
smile through your tears'
.

hocus pocus..flowers from the air
    abracadabra
             bow to the fanfare!

Just look at our pip pics
can you see we're still smiling
through divorces, illness,
the panic attacks and fear

yes..all through
our lives..
you've been standing
right there    in the wings

prompting your girls
through their fears
and their tears


'Head up..shoulders back..
  
   pause        
                                                
      first..

   first...you smile. '

© Copyright 2005 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
Nightshade
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1 posted 2005-05-05 03:17 PM


and we smiled .... and we still are .... and she is. That's why it's called "magic."
Love you & miss you.

adagio
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2 posted 2005-05-05 03:20 PM


Wow! Keep up the GREAT work dare I say PLEASE.

    

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3 posted 2005-05-05 03:26 PM


Excellent work Nancy Lee, excellent!
Sunshine
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4 posted 2005-05-05 03:32 PM



"Straighten your shoulders, don't slouch."

"Curve your fingers over the keys!"

"Don't you know the children in China are starving?"

"Smile, and the world smiles with you..."

"If that pout gets any bigger, a rooster is going to sit on your bottom lip..."

Oh, the things we heard as children...


Martie
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5 posted 2005-05-05 03:38 PM


Nancy

The deep searching into words that has happened from Karen's poem, is amazing!  Loved this piece of reflecion from your life that shows, everything is not always as it seems.  

kayjay
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6 posted 2005-05-05 05:30 PM


It is a devilish thing for a child to wear a face they do not feel.  I can feel this one too.  Hugs Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2005-05-05 06:11 PM


Thank you Nancy Lee.



It touches my heart that you all have such personal memories with us all.


Goodknight
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8 posted 2005-05-05 06:49 PM


wonderful sharing and daring Nancy - thanks and this is very good - Paul
Margherita
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9 posted 2005-05-05 06:54 PM


Wow! A true keeper!

Extremely captivating, dear Nancy!

Love, Margherita

BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2005-05-06 02:29 AM


This is so loving, Nancy~  It is evident in the words that you write and the smiles that you bring, she taught you well...like apples that don't fall far from the tree.  They are never faraway, and just as close as they always were.


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11 posted 2005-05-06 07:14 AM


I so enjoyed this
scorpio
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12 posted 2005-05-06 08:40 AM


Tinker an enlightening write.  I do enjoy when you share personal moments with us.  Your words are magic in themselves.  And your smile shines true and bright today.  Wonderful picture too!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2005-05-06 08:56 AM


Lovely sweetie, just lovely.
wandering glider
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aloft
14 posted 2005-05-06 10:02 AM


Thank you,
I needed a smile this morning.

glider

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15 posted 2005-05-06 10:43 AM


Grins and smiles and a pocket full of memories from this delightful write. What a wonderful way to start my day!

Nancy, you never fail to evoke a response in me from your poetry. Thank you!

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Beki
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16 posted 2005-05-06 11:51 AM


what a beautiful tribute  well done!
Enchantress
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17 posted 2005-05-06 12:28 PM




Your comments are so very much appreciated.
A special thank you to Serenity..
for helping us to look deeper into our souls.

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2005-05-07 12:11 PM


Nice...James
A Romantic Heart
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19 posted 2005-05-07 03:13 AM


Now I see where the Enchantress fairy gets her magic~

Magical poetry~

~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

Paul Wilson
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20 posted 2005-05-07 04:56 AM


Nancy...I hope you don't mind a guy replying to this lovely poem. Enjoyed very much.
Reminds me of being a young boy and trying too get the nerve up too talk to a girl without making a fool out of myself. Believe it or not I am still shy in real life...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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