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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-05-05 04:29 AM



Peel off the blinders,
see what is in front
of you,

You run, avoid truth,
truth your heart,
speaks to you,

Afraid of giving in,
becoming connected,
committed?

What are you afraid of?

Inject my thoughts,
deep into you,
to find,

The Answer,
to what you have
been asking?

Is right before your eyes,

You are my question,
and I am,
your answer...


"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-05-05 08:56 AM


very nicely done....
yes, sometimes the answer is right in front of our eyes and we fail to see it. Enjoyed your thoughts here.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-05-05 09:23 AM


well done, and a gal who describes me to a T.  Now, in regards to your question, "What are you afraid of"  welp, how much time do you have?  hehe, there is never usually one reason, but many....

A well thought out poem which really opens my windows up...hehe...hugs to you and to he....

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2005-05-06 06:04 AM


Thank you Donna and Lee for reading and leaving your words...much appreciated!


~ARH

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

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