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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2005-05-03 01:26 PM

I have fallen,
fallen into you

in your eyes of Heaven
filled of
endless skies of blue

I have fallen,
into love with you

in our plight to Heaven
we have found in hearts
a love true

I have fallen,
and now we are two

no one can touch Heaven
in the way I am
touched by you

"In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-05-03 01:27 PM

precious

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-05-03 03:40 PM

Lovely Craig. Very, very, nice. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-05-03 04:46 PM

Hi Craig!
This is very very nicely penned indeed...very romantic!
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
-Danny Kaye

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2005-05-03 05:14 PM

sigh...heaven looks wonderful from your eyes....

ME~

I don’t mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-05-03 08:22 PM

Nice writing...James

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2005-05-06 11:12 AM

A most *heavenly* fall~
You certainly know how to romance the written word.
Beautiful poem, Craig~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-05-06 11:18 AM

pretty and devoted

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2005-05-07 09:05 AM

beautiful words of love and devotion Craig. Well done!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2005-05-07 06:53 PM

I know about this falling.

It's Heaven indeed!

Beautiful!

Love, Margherita

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

10 posted 2005-05-07 07:23 PM

auh.............

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

11 posted 2005-05-11 02:16 PM

I love the ending of this! Such sweet loving words!

Tara

"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness." -Friedrich Nietzsche

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