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crazy4u
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0 posted 2005-05-02 03:46 PM



Depressed
Down spirits to the ground
livid in the sound of my loneliness
Afraid witless
of change and what’s to come
on the brim of some disaster
Desperate
For a glimpse of light
or for weightless days.
Failure's breath near
doesn't let me sleep
or concentrate
leaving me no console.



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-05-02 03:58 PM


I relate to this well
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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2 posted 2005-05-02 04:37 PM


You could probably include 20% of the developed world in this and 80% of the undeveloped world

Dave

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