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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2005-05-02 03:14 PM


Countless strays
in white
and soft of thought.
Not moving-
For they have been there,
before notice came.
Circled by halos, come without
time and answers.
For now, their are none.
Stationary they are
and without mention.
Perfect,
created by one strand of Love.
A gift to us
these Stars for dreaming.
Lost by most,
should we see them move..

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-05-02 04:00 PM


pretty write here

I love the night sky!

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-05-02 04:35 PM


I haven't read a poem forwards and then read it backwards in a long time

The resonance is there

Dave

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2005-05-02 04:52 PM


Perfect,
created by one strand of Love.
A gift to us
these Stars for dreaming.


The dream of vastness filled with love.

Beautiful.

Love, Margherita

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