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Enchantress
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0 posted 2005-05-02 01:28 PM








A simple gesture, yes..
your hand in mine ~  mine in yours
and yet
no steel chain was ever stronger-
I love you.


The accidental touch of our fingertips..
and when
your kiss left a song of joy
on my lips   I knew..
I loved you.


My love for you is
the silent invisible word
between these lines
speaking itself into
a quiet kiss...
  whispering,  
I love you


The love we give to one another
blends the elements of our lives
like beautiful music..
  gently intertwining melodies
    as grand and timeless
        as forever.

© Copyright 2005 Nancy Lee - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2005-05-02 01:33 PM


New pic Nancy?  

(okay, I haven't been around much so you might have had it up awhile..)

very sweet piece.  

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-05-02 01:44 PM


the silent invisible word
between these lines

~*~

Yes!

adagio
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3 posted 2005-05-02 01:59 PM


Very good! Great flow, quite smooth

    adagio

arthur
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4 posted 2005-05-02 02:10 PM


hi nancy
I rise my hay yet again
enjoyed
why hav'nt you sent me the moon poem that I asked for !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
arthur

Ericc
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5 posted 2005-05-02 02:25 PM


Wow...love it!

Eric

Enchantress
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6 posted 2005-05-02 02:41 PM


Susan~Good to see you again!
Yes, it is a new pic taken a week or so ago.
Thanks and hugs.

Karilea~I SO appreciate you taking the time to read and comment....big hugs for my hip-sis.

adagio~I am pleased you found this appealing.
Thank you so much for your comments.

Arthur~Thank you!  I'm not sure which 'moon poem' you are referring to...e me please.  Hugs.

Eric~As always...thank you and hugs.

Nightshade
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just out of reach
7 posted 2005-05-02 03:52 PM


Teed, this is tenderly romantic. Perfect.
Miss ya lots and love ya more.

Margherita
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8 posted 2005-05-02 03:56 PM


These are words to melt upon, dear Nancy.

Beautiful.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

passing shadows
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9 posted 2005-05-02 04:01 PM


awww
this is just precious

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2005-05-02 05:11 PM


A pleasure to read...James
Goodknight
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11 posted 2005-05-02 05:38 PM


Nancy - you say love so very very well - your love poetry touches one deeply - Paul
Enchantress
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12 posted 2005-05-02 09:02 PM


Chris~Thank you little sister and I love you too.  Hugs.  

Margherita~I thank you for stopping by, reading and commenting.  Hugs.

Dixie Gal~I so much appreciate the precious!

James~Thanks and hugs coming your way.

Paul~It pleases me to know this one touched you..deeply.  Hugs.

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2005-05-02 09:09 PM


Enchantress~

*SIGH*

'My love for you is
the silent invisible word
between these lines
speaking itself into
a quiet kiss...
  whispering,  
I love you'


*SIGH*

This one is just my *SIGHS*

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
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14 posted 2005-05-02 09:43 PM


Marge~Thank you dear lady.  Hug those girlies for me.
Alicia
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15 posted 2005-05-02 09:48 PM


it is so real and alive and i am sighing...
so glad to have read this and you.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
16 posted 2005-05-02 09:50 PM


Nancy, this is absolutely beautiful.
Enchantress
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17 posted 2005-05-02 09:52 PM


Alicia~I'm so pleased you enjoyed!!  Hugs.

Sue~Hi!!  How ya doin' gal?  Hope all is well.  Thank you for responding.  Hugs.

Gentle Spirit
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18 posted 2005-05-03 07:46 AM


A lovely write for my morning Nancy.  Hugs sweet lady.
scorpio
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19 posted 2005-05-03 08:42 AM


Tinker this is beautiful.  Romantic and full of love.  I truly enjoyed this special write.
            

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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20 posted 2005-05-03 09:02 AM


Donna~Thank you and hugs back to you pretty lady.

Scorpio~It is always a pleasure to read your replies.
Sending hugs and luv your way.

kayjay
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21 posted 2005-05-03 12:04 PM


The thread of love weaves its way through your writing like an early sun shines through dappled leaves.  Hugssss KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Enchantress
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22 posted 2005-05-03 12:39 PM


Ken~How lovely your reply!
Thank you so much and big hugssss back to ya!

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23 posted 2005-05-03 05:17 PM


timeless and beautiful....

hugssss pretty lady....
your heart shows

I don’t mind spending everyday
Out on your corner in the pouring rain
Look for the girl with the broken smile
Ask her if she wants to stay awhile

Enchantress
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24 posted 2005-05-03 06:08 PM


Lauren~So nice of you to reply..
Sending hugsss back your way.

Justbleu
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25 posted 2005-06-18 02:56 PM


My favorites are always the love poems...and this is a keeper!!!!

But, besides that I alwayz enjoy your poetry!!!!

Nice to see you and be reading in the blue pages once again!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." A. Brink


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