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Miond - finished/reviewed - Deep, Deeper, Depth, Mioneds world
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Miond - finished/reviewed - Deep, Deeper, Depth, Mioneds world |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Miond was shriven when first I saw her in my mind as she fought and scrapped and decided in her world that someone occasionally settled down and in her minds Miond knew her own mind first but she was always bringing something home whether I wanted it or not On the doorstep usually where the world meets the unexpected and Miond decides or in Miond's world Rawand taunt escrim a mater Missure alog Escrim mater Dochen escrim nichted Ah behya Rawand taunt escrim a mater Or nauucht diem Telied Nauucht ah him Gedaffen Nichted moseer As Miond saw fire imaged belief of banished impotence joining bonding protecting what was necessary In memory history knowledge images Holding a path open of fibres woven to leave the lushness that must destroy as images history had created as power corrupted Growing blending throwing eons into answering the desire of loosing control as Lush ideas springing planting seeds that bodies would fight in their dreams to take and their minds to fight In their dreams Walking magic physical bounded by other stone white rough hewn stretching as her mind created the entrance she knew brought destruction and her life would be to destroy In a world she had never sought Deep as the original words of the first ideas she left put below: Deep within her light brown eyes of memories earth grass mellowed lushness tempered As her spirit rang acheons of restrain in her thoughts of light fighting restrain answered In her upbringing of her magic In a world entrapped by the chances of glory de-illusioned as in her desires she spoke the desires that would embed her In herself Miond the most learned of women with your paws you encapture living With your scent you know the world With your words the world unfurls What words could you write Without those paws and teeth In the night Who would ride upon your back In the safety they fear they lack Alas old friend and I lack age Whilst you remembered as a sage And grow younger day by day With wisdom attending Your every stay Of a deeper loss Until one day You my friend And I will stray And one day never more To a day |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
cant believe no one replied~ this is interesting, but i shall read again before i remark~ My spirit will rise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Dave, you really put a great deal of effort and thought into this wonderfully written! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Love this definite version, dear Dave. Love, Margherita |
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