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Open Poetry #35

Too Many Windows Look Out On The Rain

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2005-04-30 11:03 PM

Your heart
is a mansion
with many rooms,
and in each room
your soul is drawn
to the window
possessing the best view
of the stars.
Among the multitude
of stars,
in one small corner
of the cosmos,
I burn
with all the energy
I possess.
In the emptiness
of eternity,
Beloved,
you
bring fire
to my life
and fill my heart
with love.

©2005 by icebox

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2005-04-30 11:17 PM

how blessed you are to have a view without obstructions

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2005-05-01 05:09 AM

beautiful

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

3 posted 2005-05-01 09:37 AM

icebox

I love this, it is very beautiful, and romantic!

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2005-05-01 03:39 PM

I do like your words

Dave

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2005-05-01 05:13 PM

oh jeez this is amazing, simply beautiful and yes romantic too.

always a great read from you Icebox

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2005-05-02 02:39 AM

Sometimes you remind me of Hermann Hesse, a writer from Germany..he wrote some of the most beautiful and philosophical-like words I've ever read.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2005-05-02 09:53 AM

"your soul is drawn
to the window
possessing the best view
of the stars."

of course...if you are what she looks for.

very loving words.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2005-05-02 04:43 PM

there can never be too many windows looking out on the rain

of course, usually a person only needs one most times

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