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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-04-28 08:07 PM


Tearing Up The Dance Floor

They say that girls that wear short
dresses are trying to impress someone,
a nice slice of thigh to catch the eye
of a man that's looking for some fun.
I was dancing at a club on a Saturday
night, when a girl in a short skirt caught
my sight, and I knew just what I wanted to do.
Like John Travolta I did all my best moves,
making sure she caught my groove and I have to
admit, I tore up the Pipeline dance floor.
Well she giggled and then she laughed out
loud and I was feeling happy and proud to
be the object of her sweet attention.
But right about than I was approached by a
friend, who gave me some disturbing information.
He said that the rear of my pants looked like
an open door, and if I was smart I'd get off
the dance floor, as he pointed out the restroom
and I headed towards that direction.
I was so embarrased as I backed away, but I
had to laugh when I heard her say, "They say
that guys who show off their buns are trying
to impress someone."

JamesLee
April28
2005
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jwesley
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1 posted 2005-04-28 08:22 PM


LOL....just keep the skivies clean and no sweat, me friend..."holy" drawers are embarassing though...been there...hee,hee...
Cool write..

Jimmy

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-04-29 08:02 PM


Thanks for the nice response Jwesley...Jmaes
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3 posted 2005-05-02 07:26 PM


neat write James
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4 posted 2005-05-02 09:04 PM


JamesMichael~
Thanks for 'flashing' us a BIG SMILE with this one~

*giggling here*
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Muys
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5 posted 2005-05-03 07:38 AM


Oh James what have i laughing about that situation . Splendid
Muys

Beki
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6 posted 2005-05-05 12:20 PM


too cute./..rotfl
adagio
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7 posted 2005-05-05 05:24 PM


To embarrass yourself is easy, to rectify , not so much.Very enjoyable read.
DavePage
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8 posted 2005-05-05 06:17 PM


James

Yes

Dave

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