she sighs at the night (a duet with the divine Gentle Spirit - Donna )

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2005-04-28 06:28 AM

In the quiet
of still moments

hear her
in harmony
of sweet serene

crescendo's building
to rise and
fall

listen! oh listen
to her voice
when she calls

softly
she moves

to touch you with delight
in silhouetted glow
reflecting shimmers
of moon's light

she sighs at the night

and in her pausing?
reach
for the wet mouth of her

the blue swell
that is her breathing

swallow the cries
of her breaking
as she lays them
solitary

onto the edge of land

night after night
this is her plight

do not love her
without love

for she exists
and will give to you
her morning

with visions
of amber splendor
she seduces the dawn
in tidal motions
caressing you
with her essence

she

the temptress
entices the tempest

and rages
in her darkness
while soothing you
in gentle sway
stealing your gaze

you are spell-bound

powerless

she'll take control
to leave you
breathless

and wanting more.

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Dark Angel
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1 posted 2005-04-28 06:30 AM

Donna, thank you for giving me the opportunity to work together on a duet with you. I am truly honoured. I love how this happened, like it was meant to be. Thank you, m'gentle one

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-04-28 06:30 AM

I love how this happened, too...

so many overlapping lines of sensuousness...
without becoming cloying - a simple knowledge of

here she is, take her, but know you will
never leave her...

Yes...a verifiable

Love, Mom

passing shadows
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displaced

3 posted 2005-04-28 07:16 AM

a lovely duet

I love duets, just can't do them

God only promises a safe landing, not a calm flight.

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2005-04-28 07:57 AM

nice flow
as one voice
blending within eachoters
it works !!

LeeJ
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5 posted 2005-04-28 08:18 AM

and rages
in her darkness
while soothing you
in gentle sway
stealing your gaze

you are spell-bound

powerless

she'll take control
to leave you
breathless

and wanting more.

and that is exactly how the words of this poem enslaved me...
wanting more
Excellent write ladies, well done...bravo!

Aenimal
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6 posted 2005-04-28 08:35 AM

beautiful weaving ladies, graceful and elegant..like its authors

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-04-28 08:38 AM

hmmm you two do well together'
enjoyed the entwine here

Margherita
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8 posted 2005-04-28 08:51 AM

A true crescendo of emotions! Great duo girls!

A "happening" that deserves

Love, Margherita

Greeneyes

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9 posted 2005-04-28 08:58 AM

beautiful both poem and gal/s.....

x2 hugsssss

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2005-04-28 09:39 AM

Maree, yeah, it is so odd how it happened and yep, it sure seemed like it was meant
to happen, and I am so extremely grateful that it did.

I never dreamed when I wrote that other poem of my love for the sea that it would inspire me in ways for this one also...but it truly was your descriptions of her there by your side that helped to jog the memories
of her for me. Damn....I miss her.

You have blessed me, thank you m'dear.
Someday, I will find the appropriate words to thank you but for now
just know....you have touched me.

Kari, you know how much your words mean to me. luv ya mom.....

Hey Dixie, I have to disagree, I remember doing a beautiful duet with you!
Thanks for stopping in.

Mish, thanks so much. writing with Maree was sooo....fantastic!

Lee, I thank you so much!

Raph, aw shucks......lol... thanks much

DS, it twas my pleasure to be entwined with such a fantastic lady

thanks babe.

Margherita, I do appreciate that. It was a beautiful unplanned happening
and I think that is what makes it so very special to me. Thank you sweet lady.

Lauren baby, you know I

sis, and your words
mean so very much to me.

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

Martie

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11 posted 2005-04-28 10:20 AM

Maree and Donna

The ocean has brought me so much joy during my life....she is indeed like you say so well. Loved this duet!!!

Nightshade

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just out of reach

12 posted 2005-04-28 10:30 AM

Wonderful duet! Brava! hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

13 posted 2005-04-28 10:48 AM

Maree and Donna...this is one of the most beautiful duets ever at Passions!
I am at a loss for words..
Brava ladies...Brava!!
~Hugs to you both~

Dark Angel
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14 posted 2005-04-28 05:58 PM

Thank you all soooo very much, doing this duet with Donna was a real pleasure and so much fun and is very special to me.
You're a Gem Donna. A very special Lady and Poet. I will duet with you anytime. Thank you.

I am looking at her, she rests peacefully this morn. Though the wind mocks her.

smile

Bella Donna!

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 2005-04-29 09:05 AM

Martie, Chris and Nancy, thank you each for your words, I truly appreciate it.

Maree?

Bella....
You humble me and make me

even in your replies you write such
beauty,
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I am looking at her, she rests peacefully this morn. Though the wind mocks her.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

you do realize that reply
is pure poetry waiting to happen
don't ya gal?

An honour, indeed mine to duet with you
lady....
ANYTIME.

Have a great day/night everyone!

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

~K~
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16 posted 2005-04-29 09:09 AM

The myth
subjected
to reality
leaves
everybody
wanting.
...I'm not sure what that has to do with anything but I felt it needed saying.

(I've been wandering aimlessly for awile) Thanks for asking D.A.!

vandana

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17 posted 2005-04-29 10:07 AM

nice read

Gentle Spirit
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18 posted 2005-04-29 01:24 PM

~K~ usually if I feel it needs to be said, I go ahead and say it. Thanks for stopping in.

Good to see you Vandana, thanks for your reply.

Dark Angel
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19 posted 2005-04-29 06:00 PM

Donna?

" you do realize that reply
is pure poetry waiting to happen
don't ya gal? "

why don't you go for it? it's a request/challenge ...

Thank you Bella.

~K~ "I'm not sure what that has to do with anything but I felt it needed saying"

Speak and i shall listen.

Thanks for wandering aimlessly into this thread

Vandana, thanks for reading.

Thank you all so very much.

and Donna?

and Thank you.

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Ratleader

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20 posted 2005-04-30 09:53 AM

Outstanding! This is one of the best duets I've read.

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freewheelin
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21 posted 2005-04-30 10:16 AM

awesome write, really seductive.

nakdthoughts
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22 posted 2005-04-30 12:03 PM

simply wonderful...the flow between you two captured me and began this day for me with a lift.

Thank you both
hugs
M

aujussy wolf

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23 posted 2005-05-02 02:13 PM

wowsa , hot and hotter you two are awesome
as always ...woof woof
- wolfy

adagio
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24 posted 2005-05-02 04:34 PM

So great and yes seductive made me read it over and over.........

adagio

Gentle Spirit
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25 posted 2005-05-04 02:53 PM

You are all so wonderful
and I am glad that you enjoyed
this blending of words.

Maree, thank you...thank you...thank you...
again...

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

suthern

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26 posted 2005-05-04 04:33 PM

Absolutely wonderful... you blend seamlessly! *S*

Dark Angel
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27 posted 2005-05-04 05:14 PM

Thank you all for your kind words and support...

Donna?

Thank You!

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

BluesSerenade
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28 posted 2005-05-04 05:35 PM

Exquisite duetting ladies, but one would expect no less from the likes of you two.
This is a fine compliment to poetry and the written word.

Impressive, indeed~ Kudos, hugs and all that!

Gentle Spirit
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29 posted 2005-05-20 10:14 AM

Lori, sorry my reply comes so late...
It is so good to see you hon
and I hope your doing well.

Maree.

It was a pleasure.

SEA

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with you

30 posted 2005-05-20 05:46 PM

O M G
ladies...
this is so excellent
I am keeping this...
wow wow wow!

Gentle Spirit
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31 posted 2005-06-01 07:23 PM

Sea, I almost missed your comment.
Thank you for stopping in and I am sooo pleased that you enjoyed this!

Beki
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32 posted 2005-06-02 03:03 AM

nice

JamesMichael
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33 posted 2005-06-03 02:43 AM

I think so...James

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