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Saturday Night Waltz

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 04-27-2005 05:12 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


So shyly
Under the late autumn moon
We’ll take center stage
Together walk upon the floor

Hand in hand
Move as we had before
With others in better years

And just perhaps
If we do it well
Some cherub’s lips will smile

While we become
Just once more young again

Who knows what may happen then


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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 04-27-2005 05:17 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

B E A U T I F U L !!
Very very much enjoyed this piece John!
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

DavePage
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2 posted 04-27-2005 05:24 PM       View Profile for DavePage   Email DavePage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DavePage

The world will more than

As stone

Dave
yv
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3 posted 04-27-2005 11:35 PM       View Profile for yv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yv

A small smile creeps my lips.  I loved this poem...as I do all of your works.  You are nothing short of brilliant.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

LeeJ
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4 posted 04-28-2005 09:03 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

hope, and the excitement of encouragement...
Huan Yi
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5 posted 04-28-2005 09:47 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Huan Yi


Thanks all.

Please, if you get the opportunity, listen
to Aaron Copland’s “Saturday Night Waltz”
from “Rodeo”.

Thanks again.

John

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on the threshold of a dream


6 posted 04-28-2005 01:40 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

While we become
Just once more young again

Who knows what may happen then

Who knows... indeed. *S* Miracles aren't exclusive property of the young in years. *S* Beautiful!!!
yv
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7 posted 04-28-2005 01:50 PM       View Profile for yv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yv

Amazing.  You are a poet's real inspiraition my friend.  I loved every bit of this poem.  As you can see...I had to respond twice, for I am in this mine shaft of a high school and I needed your poem to bring me back to my earth.  Thank you.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass


8 posted 04-30-2005 10:29 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Yes....that's the word, just yes. Perhaps then, perhaps it will.

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9 posted 04-30-2007 03:41 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

it is soooooo nice to read something like this from you. so very good and alive.
 
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