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ctowen
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0 posted 2005-04-27 02:25 PM


across this mile
   which stretches us
   outreached and far
   just tempting us

across a smile
   as two of us
   share its moment
   releasing us

across the while
   this time for us
   we find a love
   completing us


... and all the while
   like two such dreams
   fitting two us

"In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living."
  

© Copyright 2005 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2005-04-27 03:00 PM


Love this Craig. Good to read you again.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-04-27 03:09 PM


very nice write
ctowen
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3 posted 2005-04-27 05:10 PM


Thank you both ...

       you are both passionate hearts!!

                                        

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Member Rara Avis
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4 posted 2005-04-27 05:20 PM


"you know I'd walk 1000 miles if I could just see you tonight...." I am reminded....always a pleasure to read you....big 'ole bear hugssss...




ME~

~~*~~
I'm Standing on a bridge
I'm waitin in the dark
I thought that you'd be here by now
Theres nothing but the rain
~~**~~

ctowen
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5 posted 2005-04-27 05:26 PM


...aahhhh ... all you need to do is close your glowing eyes Lauren, and wish upon that dream ....

     thank you for your kind and wishful reply!!

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bostonia
6 posted 2005-07-01 07:19 PM


i like this one so much- rhyming so often sounds forced but this flows so well. can't wait to read more amazing work from you!
ctowen
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7 posted 2005-07-01 07:36 PM


Thank you StarE ...

    I have read your work too ... very good!

                     Thanks for stopping by and
                        I hope to see more of you.  

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