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Nightshade
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0 posted 2005-04-27 02:19 AM



at long last slumber
calls soft to me in yawn form
warm sheets beckoning
and blankets of safe cacoon
swathe me in delightful dreams
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Night All !!
Chris Barker
April 2005
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© Copyright 2005 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-04-27 02:40 AM


sweet dreams :

sigh i want to sleep too now       

Enjoyed

Mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

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2 posted 2005-04-27 04:59 AM


A lovely poem to start the day Chris..thank you..

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3 posted 2005-04-27 06:35 AM


Wonderful!!
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4 posted 2005-04-27 08:00 AM


Very relaxing!!
Hi, little friend!!
Hugs,
Ethel

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5 posted 2005-04-27 08:08 AM


Yawn.......

Sorry Chris, this poem was so soothing, I almost dozed off.....

nice work.....

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6 posted 2005-04-27 08:10 AM


beautiful chris. jealous here, either sleep forgot to call or its got the wrong number cause its been days. stupid toronto weather doesn't help...groan
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7 posted 2005-04-27 09:08 AM


Chris..what on earth were you doing up at that hour??
Did these beautiful words come to you in a dream?
I suppose perhaps you may still be asleep now,
but this is very well written.
~Hugs and love..e-mail me, Teed~

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dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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8 posted 2005-04-27 09:15 AM


LOL...2:19 a.m.?  I should GUESS SO!

It's been gone awhile, but I imagine
my insomnia will return one day soon,
and I will watch the nightbirds on
their hunt...

well done, Chris!

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9 posted 2005-04-27 10:03 AM


Thankyou All & Hugs all round.
Boy, am I tired. lol.

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10 posted 2005-05-07 07:38 PM


This speaks to me right now! So lovely!

It's 1.36am here and ... hmmmm I decided a little late to bake bread (I love that!), but it needs so much time and now I hope to remain awake until it's cooked!! Lol!

Good night!

Love, Margherita

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11 posted 2005-05-07 08:37 PM


Chris, I do hope you can get some sleep. And, sleep well.
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12 posted 2005-05-07 08:38 PM


May your dreams always be peaceful ones sweetie.  Pretty write hon.
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