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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-04-26 04:52 PM

Follows on from deeper and all of this in reverse order
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Holding the path open her control of fibres woven into whatever shape would suit to leave the lustness she knew she must destroy as made in images and history it had created power that had corrupted

She saw the old man and knew his den and he threw his being bridging ignorance as a fire imaged a belief of a banished impotence joining bonding protecting for what was necessary

In memory history knowledge

Follows on again from Deep
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Growing blending throwing eons into answering the desire of loosing control

Lush was the ideas springing planting seeds that bodies would fight in their dreams to take and their minds to fight

She walked the magic physical bounded by other stone white rough hewn stretching firmly as her mind created the entrance

She knew she brought destruction and her life would be to destroy

Animals stalking were for others she stalked for need

In a world she had never sought

regards

Dave

The original words of the first ideas I left put below:

Deep within her light brown eyes ran memories of earth grass mellowed lushness
Tempered

In her spirit rang acheons of restrain in her thoughts of light fighting restrain
Answered

In her upbringing she knew of her magic
She knew large trees would grow animals stalking
In a world

In her mind she was entrapped by the chances of glory de-illusioned

In her desires she spoke of that launch that would embed her in a cosy glory of self

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2005-04-26 10:07 PM

fascinating read - i enjoyed the feel of thoughts streaming through my mind

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2005-04-26 10:12 PM

Dave,
This was one fanstic read,enjoyed it.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-04-27 06:41 AM

stunning Dave!

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2005-04-27 03:48 PM

Thanks

I'm starting to write the male side

Dave

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2005-04-30 04:45 AM

amazing~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2005-04-30 02:10 PM

Thanks Marsha

I started writing the male side and it disappeared into 0 and has stayed there the last time I looked.

regards

Dave

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