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Just Another Tuesday
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Just Another Tuesday |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The real me is still hidden in the mix of words where I love you is spread so thin that it cannot be felt. On days like these, I bleed blue, wishing to be spared the sticks and stones as I watch the sun try to shine through the lies of my life, where the only warmth comes from the reading of others' happiness. It is only Tuesday and already these eyes are worn tired, the thoughts behind dated in yesterday, when anticipation kept me and your touch against my curves would send me and words were just words but a kiss... well it wasn't just a kiss. It was a challenge in the shadows, instant fantasy come true. I remember those times when I felt like a spoiled child... and now? I feel hungry all the time. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hugs to ya M. and thank you for sharing. especially liked It was a challenge in the shadows, instant fantasy come true. I remember those times when I felt like a spoiled child... and now? I feel hungry all the time. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, There is hunger and then there is hunger.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"but a kiss... well it wasn't just a kiss. It was a challenge in the shadows, instant fantasy come true. I remember those times when I felt like a spoiled child... and now? I feel hungry all the time." Excellent write Maureen... I know this hungry ache. Well said. Sending hugs your way, Nancy. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
i liked the "instant fantasy" part enjoyed bernie  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
On days like these, I bleed blue, wishing to be spared the sticks and stones the whole thing is worth quoting, wow... I remember when I could still 'feel', when I longed for life to be different, when I longed for 'his' touch...now I just exist...not sure which is worse...but I do know I read you...and I wish I had something/someone to long for sigh |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those who know that hunger appreciate the smallest joys even more.  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
nodding and agreeing with Kari here..... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
You make me think when you write I know I am not supposed to do this but you write visions I can see and feelings I can feel And I never wrote this of course I love the mixture and feeling in your words Dave |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
oh girl, collapse me why don't ya. excellent and that last line broke me. a  Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Keepin' this!! Hugs to you dear lady. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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