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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-04-26 04:37 AM


Light incredible, cool
jewelled dazzling sea.
Sky hung with
seabirds, chill wind
whipping up sheer
cliffs, warm sun
welcome on faces.
Steps descend to
smooth white boulders,
like spheres of
marble, cleaned by
the sea's crashing
washing machine waves.
Undulating green land,
shone shadows lengthened
under the sun's
relentless amber stream.
A day to
recall, midst winter's
snapping cold ice.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-04-26 07:04 AM


nice one
Margherita
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2 posted 2005-04-26 07:52 AM


Undulating green land,
shone shadows lengthened
under the sun's
relentless amber stream.


Beautiful visions!

Love, Margherita

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-04-26 07:53 AM


a soothing landscape you weave....

lovely

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just out of reach
4 posted 2005-04-26 09:57 AM


I can picture it all Goldenrose!
Beautiful. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-04-26 10:35 AM


I am "so" there!

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-04-26 12:03 PM


Beautiful imagery GR!  The images are so fresh, one can feel the cold.  
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