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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-04-26 12:37 PM


rainbows kiss the sky
after clouded eyes
shed tears of cleansing

letting go

of pent up fears

of gray cloaked days

and fog laden nights

veiled in the shrouded mist
of the uncertain

see now the sun!

its ray gleam shimmer
igniting hues of    
red      yellow       green

promising the bright
of the morrow moment

arched in the light
of a
rainbow kissed sky

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
bslicker
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1 posted 2005-04-26 12:44 PM


very beautiful vision
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

majnu
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2 posted 2005-04-26 01:08 AM


a cloud in a corner of the sky glorified by the dawn.

-majnu
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EvocativeVerse2
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3 posted 2005-04-26 03:58 AM


Love this Susan. A great read for me at 3 am. Bravo! Bravo! Bravo!
Goldenrose
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4 posted 2005-04-26 06:05 AM


Can see it rising high within my mind..the image is alive and shining colours vibrant..thank you Susan..

Goldenrose.

Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt)

passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-04-26 07:10 AM


beautiful
LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-04-26 07:12 AM


your a name in your own time, which is yours...be happy Suz...go for the gusto

This was simply awesome

Margherita
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7 posted 2005-04-26 07:59 AM


promising the bright
of the morrow moment

arched in the light
of a
rainbow kissed sky



Absolutely beautiful. It holds hope.

Love, Margherita

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2005-04-26 09:00 AM


lovely writing Susan...
rain is in the forecast, maybe a rainbow will fill the skies

*s
M

Enchantress
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9 posted 2005-04-26 09:02 AM


Very very lovely Susan..very tranquil.
Hugs and have a great day!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2005-04-26 09:04 AM


so very peaceful and beautiful Susan.
Hugs!

Susan
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11 posted 2005-04-26 10:30 AM


You are all most kind my friends - thank you for the gift of your hearts and your eyes -

Love S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

DavePage
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12 posted 2005-04-26 05:06 PM


I'm sorry you stopped writing, Susan

Dave

vandana
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13 posted 2005-04-26 07:54 PM


nice read
Susan
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14 posted 2005-04-26 10:03 PM


Dave - i've not stopped - just slowed way down as the world around me has once again demanded my attention - not as much time to come and play - wish it weren't so - and yet, many good things going on so s'okay in that regards -

V - thank you my friend

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

ThUnDeRkYsS
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15 posted 2005-04-26 11:16 PM


Simply a beautiful picture, thank you for sharing.

Brian

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



Dark Stranger
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16 posted 2005-04-27 06:59 AM


soothsin, this is a place
one could get lost in
as others we might speak of

enjoyed it lady love

Sunshine
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17 posted 2005-04-27 07:02 AM


A lovely place
for a pretty woman...
when life gets in the way?

Eat Skittles.


Susan
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walking the surreal
18 posted 2005-04-27 03:09 PM


Thank you Brian

D - to be lost with you would be to be found

Sunshine - you brighten my day and smile me- thank you my friend

Hugs - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

froggy
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19 posted 2005-04-28 04:28 PM


Wonderful read.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

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