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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-04-26 12:16 PM

The window struck,
one drop sails away
and slowly draws a path
to where it strives for exit,
and soon another comes
to serves as its replacement,
and from some hidden source i've yet to meet,
the rain beats in the trenches.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

1 posted 2005-04-26 12:17 PM

the last two lines were great.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-04-26 12:52 PM

from some source I've yet to meet - I love that -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2005-04-26 12:59 PM

I sat back and watched this happening...

wondermous!

m

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2005-04-26 01:43 AM

....I only rain...when it aches....

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-04-26 07:10 AM

stunning!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-04-26 07:13 AM

and from some hidden source i've yet to meet

yeah babee!

Full of life and love for life this morning

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2005-04-26 02:37 PM

I felt as though I was on a journey,
into your thoughts along with the rain drops.
Very well done Mish.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2005-04-26 10:08 PM

always liked to get wet

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2005-04-26 10:26 PM

WOW !!

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

10 posted 2005-04-26 10:29 PM

EXQUISITE!!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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