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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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It's just those words, belittling words resounding through my head. Wishing for the worst of worst, those thoughts I often dread. He can spout those awful words, and aim them to my heart. Such hatefulness in eyes once soft. Inside I split apart. The pain is ever present now, I think he feels the end. Thus buttons push from words need said. In pride I try, defend. What once there was, but now is gone except for feelings scoffed. I can't pretend nor comprehend the loss, what once was soft. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Words spoken in anger? Hope not. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
more like disdain...I suppose M |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Many times these type of word are not meant from the heart. adagio |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
oh these words were meant to aim...and maim...and they did what he intended... to break me down. I'm done for the evening and probably a day or so. Thanks for the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
M, you are precious, too precious to open your ears to such things. Close them and fill your heart with soft words again. Bitterness is the source of foul language. I feel sorry for him if he feels he must speak like that to make up for what he lacks. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
 M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Well dear M, You know I care for you so. Credibility is only for those we respect. And I respect you so very much. Hope it helps to wash away those hurtful things said that have no legitimacy. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You are very sweet Larry. It is amazing how some words can wipe away years of caring. hugs and thanks M |
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