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Open Poetry #35

Okinawa

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-04-25 05:49 PM

The hills roll
An ancient castle

In long grasses
Summer wind

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2005-04-25 05:58 PM

never been, but see it in this

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

2 posted 2005-04-25 07:50 PM

Quite picturesque

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2005-04-25 09:32 PM

i saw all this unfold before my eyes...

fantastic Huan

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

4 posted 2005-04-26 01:52 AM

A lesson in how to write short verse with impact.....beautifully done!

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-04-26 02:46 AM

Nice...James

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

6 posted 2007-04-30 07:20 PM

indifference.

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