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Okinawa

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 04-25-2005 05:49 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi



The hills roll
An ancient castle

In long grasses
Summer wind
© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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never been, but see it in this
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Quite picturesque
Dark Angel
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i saw all this unfold before my eyes...

fantastic Huan

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A lesson in how to write short verse with impact.....beautifully done!

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Nice...James
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indifference.
 
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