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~Willow~
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since 2002-08-10
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0 posted 2005-04-25 10:59 AM



come, my love
shelter beneath me
eyes closed in whispers
I shall sing songs to shame
sirens & stir souls into longing
shelter here beneath this shade
fill upon ripened fruit 'til replete
lay down roots within rich soil
stay 'til dawn or even forever
I am yours now and then
then and now

I am
your
shade
anchor
here...

~Willow~

© Copyright 2005 ~Willow~ - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-04-25 12:07 PM


Willow~This is breathtaking!
Both in words and presentation.
Into my library with this keeper.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
2 posted 2005-04-25 12:36 PM


~Willow~

   Your poem is a treat in every way!  It has such lovely words, meaning, and form.  A real pleasure to read!

         ~misce

DavePage
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3 posted 2005-04-25 02:28 PM


Talent

Dave

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2005-04-25 02:53 PM


Lovely, Willow.  
Thank you for sharing.

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-04-25 06:10 PM


stunning!
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