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Come Passion

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 04-25-2005 04:40 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Imagining once
How it was beautiful—

In morning light
The broken vase

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


1 posted 04-25-2005 07:53 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

you touch the mind with so few words~~
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passing shadows
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displaced


2 posted 04-25-2005 07:54 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

beautiful indeed
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass


3 posted 04-27-2005 09:24 AM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

This exquisite piece....written two days ago and it has only two replies.....

.....thinking of that leaves me ashamed of this group. You've said more in twelve words, shown more of what it is to live, than some of us -- myself included -- often say in twelve verses.

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Martie
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4 posted 04-27-2005 05:53 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

So much truth in these words!
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


5 posted 04-27-2005 05:54 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

WONDERFUL!!
You express so much in so few words.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

yv
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6 posted 04-27-2005 11:32 PM       View Profile for yv   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yv

Broken as do the pieces
Of my
Inner anticipation of the
Soul's rapture

I feel your emptiness within
Evenescent shafts of my
Ragged mind

Free me from your
Tortoure of
Glass and
Propane

As always it is more than a pleasure to read your work that leaves so much to the mind.  Loved it.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

LeeJ
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SE PA


7 posted 04-28-2005 09:03 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

this gives so much meaning, as your poems always do, they are sensuous...delightful and embracing...thank you
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on the threshold of a dream


8 posted 04-28-2005 01:37 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I wish I could say as much in paragraphs as you manage in just a few words... This is very much appreciated. *S*
Drauntz
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9 posted 04-30-2007 03:47 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

the peace.
 
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