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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-04-25 04:40 AM

Imagining once
How it was beautiful—

In morning light
The broken vase

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-04-25 07:53 AM

you touch the mind with so few words~~
M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2005-04-25 07:54 AM

beautiful indeed

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2005-04-27 09:24 AM

This exquisite piece....written two days ago and it has only two replies.....

.....thinking of that leaves me ashamed of this group. You've said more in twelve words, shown more of what it is to live, than some of us -- myself included -- often say in twelve verses.

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Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-04-27 05:53 PM

So much truth in these words!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2005-04-27 05:54 PM

WONDERFUL!!
You express so much in so few words.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

6 posted 2005-04-27 11:32 PM

Broken as do the pieces
Of my
Inner anticipation of the
Soul's rapture

I feel your emptiness within
Evenescent shafts of my
Ragged mind

Free me from your
Tortoure of
Glass and
Propane

As always it is more than a pleasure to read your work that leaves so much to the mind. Loved it.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-04-28 09:03 AM

this gives so much meaning, as your poems always do, they are sensuous...delightful and embracing...thank you

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2005-04-28 01:37 PM

I wish I could say as much in paragraphs as you manage in just a few words... This is very much appreciated. *S*

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

9 posted 2007-04-30 03:47 PM

the peace.

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