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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-04-24 01:13 PM



They’re all
In need of repair

Even then
Out of context with their time
Their former glory
Will hardly reappear

The seedy stores
Bereft of modern wares
Musty smells
Within their walls

What’s the point
Of even stopping
For awhile
If you wouldn’t want
What’s left for sale



© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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1 posted 2005-04-24 02:23 PM


Huan

It sounds like bad end of town boarded up life

Well written

Dave

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2 posted 2005-04-26 12:20 PM


wonderful description to too many towns.

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3 posted 2005-04-26 01:50 AM


Sounds like we shop in the same stores.......

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Huan Yi
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4 posted 2005-04-26 04:43 AM



RL

I don’t bother . . .

Thanks all for reading

John


passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-04-26 08:16 PM


enjoyed
Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-04-30 03:51 PM


sigh!!!
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