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Huan Yi
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They’re all
In need of repair

Even then
Out of context with their time
Their former glory
Will hardly reappear

The seedy stores
Bereft of modern wares
Musty smells
Within their walls

What’s the point
Of even stopping
For awhile
If you wouldn’t want
What’s left for sale


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Huan

It sounds like bad end of town boarded up life

Well written

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wonderful description to too many towns.

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Sounds like we shop in the same stores.......

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Huan Yi
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RL

I don’t bother . . .

Thanks all for reading

John

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enjoyed
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sigh!!!
 
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