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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-04-24 12:29 PM



Do You Know Me

Do you see me
Blue eyes, auburn hair
Do you feel me
Loving heart that I wear

Do you hear me
My words from inside
Do you hold me
Feel heart side by side

Do you taste me
Sensuous and sweet
Do you sense all
When our hearts meet

Do you know me
Of my joys and despair
Do you look beyond
Blue eyes , auburn hair

HopeĀ©2005

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2005-04-24 01:33 PM


Your words dance in the readers eyes and I could visualize the blue eyes and the auburn hair, which are a lovely part of the  surface beyond which your heart pulses so passionately.

This has a joyful lightness, even though you wonder about the depth of whom you want to look closer.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

DavePage
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Posts 2917

2 posted 2005-04-24 01:42 PM


Hope

You always write words I enjoy reading

Dave

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2005-04-24 03:22 PM


good one Hope
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-04-24 03:26 PM


Lovely write Hope..
and a good question many of us ask.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2005-04-24 05:09 PM


Fabulous write, Hope.  Unfortunately some people never get past the exterior of ones being.  I hope all is well with you.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
6 posted 2005-04-24 10:35 PM


to look beyond takes a real man/woman
to accept for one's self is a blessing when it comes

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2005-04-25 06:13 PM


So much beauty to be revealed in a relationship as layers unfold...James
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