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WindWalker
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0 posted 2005-04-23 09:16 PM


Time's lonely shadows lengthen over the earth:
the spirit of Wind Walker stands alone
atop a rising knoll overlooking empty rolling plains;
a restless autumn wind blows unchecked, untamed,
moaning tearful over desecrated  burial grounds.

Wind Walker hears the coyotes howl in pale moonlight;
the thunder of mighty buffalo herds crossing the plains;
feels the throbbing drums around flickering camp fires;
sees his people, ghosts from years of fulness,
performing the ancient buffalo dance.
He smells the smoke rising peacefully in the clear night...
then the vision, so sweet to the eye, vanishes,
as did the buffalo and the people.

Numb of soul and empty of heart,
Wind Walker turns toward the spirit mountains,
taking the hallowed path of the grandfathers:
the last shaman of the great plains
to seek a vision for understanding:
why did the white man so savagely destroy
his world? kill his blood brothers?
annihilate the life-giving buffalo?
What kind of hatred moved such a plague
across the once-living prairie?

As Wind Walker approaches snow-capped giants
a thunderous echo beckons: he realizes
his earth time is of the past;
his restless, homeless spirit,
like the people of the campfires,
the coyotes of the moonlight,
the buffaloes on their ghostly trek,
must relinquish their place in  the foothills:
the conquerors lay their pipelines and fences
cutting furrows deep into the soil.

Only acceptance, only love can now decide
the future of a once proud and virgin land:
no challenge, no showdown, no vengeance,
but simple understanding,
can ever demonstrate the truth.

© Copyright 2005 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2005-04-23 09:34 PM


Excellent!  Speechless here...this is really striking in it's explanation, understanding and truth.  As a crystal pool, the ripples flow outward.
TD

miscellanea
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2 posted 2005-04-23 09:47 PM


It speaks the heart.  Acceptance is all that remains, not the land or buffalo. Outstanding poetry, yet our loss is disturbing.

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wandering glider
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3 posted 2005-04-23 11:29 PM


The truth is clear enough
his destiny on the wind
the man of the earth
with his colors blended
has sealed his own fate


glider

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Member Patricius
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4 posted 2005-04-23 11:35 PM


Captivating write, much enjoyed. Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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5 posted 2005-04-24 12:23 PM


Being the odd one, I reject 'acceptance.'
I fight submission, feel the spirit of the phoenix yet lives.

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6 posted 2005-04-24 04:01 PM


I read this last night along with many on your homepage and enjoyed every single one, and will try to get to them all eventually.  Very nicely done.


~ Carpe' Diem ~

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Canada eh.
7 posted 2005-04-24 04:04 PM


Excellent write...so very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

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dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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