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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
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0 posted 2005-04-23 08:09 PM



Raspberry Murmurs

Revisiting, winter cleaves a distance in uncertain instance
As the rock, paper, scissors shivers upon newly budded seeds
Through my window holding warm the simmer of my needs
Private talks with you, blue eyes abysmal to the cool of fool

Stirred emotions notion now all that was felt and how the snows melt
Jubilant the tango light fandango that we push and pull with hearts so full
To spill over, streams conjoined in dreams and swift the light fantastic
Hiding from ourselves and from each other with regard, love so elastic

A smile is always waiting by the tears, flooding over miles and years
Long and strong the beat of endless fascination, stems a rose from hibernation
The fruits of shared remember, one September colors all the rest, the best
Futility, the snows in glee fall fervently to pools of sparkling jewels

And least a kiss blown to you on the wind that I will not rescind
Admiration glows undimmed, and sow hello in raspberry murmurs

Copyright Kkh 04/23/05

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Soulfisher
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1 posted 2005-04-23 08:38 PM


Excelent mummering indeed, but how are you at stuttering. I very much enjoyed this.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-04-23 08:47 PM


"A smile is always waiting by the tears, flooding over miles and years
Long and strong the beat of endless fascination, stems a rose from hibernation
The fruits of shared remember, one September colors all the rest, the best
Futility, the snows in glee fall fervently to pools of sparkling jewels"

Mmmmmm...read this Kathleen and you know,
I don't feel the same about the snow now.
Excellent write indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2005-04-23 09:03 PM


Yes, a very enjoyable read, my friend, one that most certainly deserves "...a kiss blown to you on the wind that I will not rescind"....

Jimmy

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
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4 posted 2005-04-23 09:11 PM


This was really good, I love the imagery in this well crafted poem!
Aleta
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since 2005-04-17
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Louisiana
5 posted 2005-04-23 09:19 PM


A soft, gentle sound this poem flows, encompassing a plant of the rose family that produces the fruits of emotions.  Beautiful write.
miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
6 posted 2005-04-23 09:59 PM


A smile is always waiting by the tears, flooding over miles and years

You did it again, TD.  You left a phrase buzzing over and over in my ears.  I have never read one of your poems that this didn't happen.  You write so melodically.

       miscellanea

EvocativeVerse2
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7 posted 2005-04-24 04:53 AM


I really like this one. Almost musical as mine eyes devour each word.
Margherita
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8 posted 2005-04-24 08:07 AM


the snows in glee fall fervently to pools of sparkling jewels



A hello that echoes beautifully in the heart.

Perfectly penned, as usual!

Love, Margherita

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