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Margherita
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0 posted 2005-04-23 11:25 AM



    


A single moment in time


Our voices mingle
in entangled strings
of emotional chaos.
Surreal perfection
of nightingales.
I love you.

Astonished silence
revealing purity.
Continuum flow
of soul vibrations.
Full moon high
rushing into dawn.
Pure essence offered
by trembling lips.
I love you.

Primordial sound waves
dash against the walls
of our shyness.
Laughter and tears burst
like sentinels of truth
into this single
moment in time.
I love you.

Universe shares in
this divine symphony.
Heart gates wide open
we collect the
brilliance of stars.
Our words rays of light.
Sun and moon dancing
across the indigo sky.
I love you.


***

Love, Margherita


© Copyright 2005 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2005-04-23 11:30 AM


"Universe shares in
this divine symphony.
Heart gates wide open
we collect the
brilliance of stars.
Our words rays of light.
Sun and moon dancing
across the indigo sky.
I love you."


Lovely this..
lovely you..
very much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-04-23 12:30 PM


"Continuum flow
of soul vibrations."

~ Beautifully expressed!

Your poetry always touches me.

Love & Soul Light,
Linda

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-04-23 01:45 PM


The moon and the stars shine happy with the wonder of this single moment - how lovely-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

miscellanea
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OH
4 posted 2005-04-23 01:48 PM


Laughter and tears burst
like sentinels of truth
into this single
moment in time.
I love you.

Really enjoy your poem and love this line, especially, Margherita.  It's so profound!
Glad I was able to see you again.

             misce

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2005-04-23 02:10 PM


"sentinals of truth"...
Heartfelt and vibrant.
TD

Ericc
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6 posted 2005-04-23 02:13 PM


Sharing this moment...always.

Beautiful!

Love,
Eric

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2005-04-23 05:44 PM


OH WOW!

absolutely gorgeous!

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just out of reach
8 posted 2005-04-23 06:24 PM


Laughter and tears burst
like sentinels of truth
into this single
moment in time.


Beautiful thoughts perfectly penned.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

DavePage
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9 posted 2005-04-23 06:24 PM


Lovely words

Dave

Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2005-04-24 06:17 AM


Thank you my dear poet friends for sharing with me so lovingly this single moment in time.

Love and may you enjoy a beautiful Sunday!
Margherita

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