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A life that sings in harmony
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A life that sings in harmony |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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A life that sings in harmony Which takes a hold and sets you free Has sirens that all call to me But they are only dreams of glee A life that sings in harmony Has breezes calm and joy to see It’s where my mind might often be It’s where the pain of day is free A life that sings in harmony Has open doors without a key Paths of gold, the magic tree It is the place I’d like to be A life that sings in harmony Is only in the mind you see But I can dream and then can be Within the place that comforts me |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hear, hear my friend...we all need to tbe there at times...Kool write! And True... jwesley |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Rick, I just watched "Don Quixote, Man de la Mancha" on T.V. this morning. Your last verse sums it up perfectly. Again, a pleasure to read your poetry. miscellanea |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
jwesley, nice to see you here, thank you so much for your reply, much appreciated. miscellanea, thank you for your comment and reply, great to see you here. Sincerely Rick |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
enjoyed this... I think everyone has a place like this, that they go to..that "happy place"  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like the rhythm here, musical - and it is truth you play out in your words song - it is good to have a place we can go and dream in harmony- SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
only in the mind so true good write Rick...I'm so happy you're back sharing with us |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Rick, I know every time I click on your name I will not be disappointed... this one is no exception. Extremely well done!! Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sea, I think we all need that place, I search it often and at times to find it. Thanks for you reply. Dear Susan, thanks for the reply and the comments, all are very much appreciated. Dear Dixie, nice to be back, thanks for the reply once again, the mind sometimes needs to be a big place. Dear Nancy, nice to see you here, thanks for your reply, it is so good to be back. To you all my friends, again thank you very much. Sincerely Rick |
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