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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-04-23 07:09 AM


Attachments

Attachments are the fireflies
That lights the dark within your sky
They sing a lullaby of seems
That speed the echoes of your dreams

They are the symbols of your lace
The weave that takes you place to place
The spirit of your phantoms call
The shadows dancing on your wall

They are the hews in clouds above
They are the embers of your love
The very boundaries of your awe
The flickering of evermore

Attachments are the gee of milk
They are the petals feel of silk
Intoxication of a drink
The fire in a lovers wink

I strew them on my gardens path
And love the feel of aftermath


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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
1 posted 2005-04-23 07:17 AM


Oh, what a wonderful, simply wonderful, write!  
scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
2 posted 2005-04-23 09:17 AM


Sy this is a wonderfully uplifting write.  Very well done!!

believe in what your heart feels...

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2005-04-23 09:27 AM


Great! .. Loved the ending...had to laugh at that...fit so well...

jimmy

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
4 posted 2005-04-23 09:37 AM


  Top of the morning to you, Sy.  This, music to my ears.  Thanks!  Enjoy the day.
          miscellanea

  

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-04-23 11:26 AM


Beautiful beautiful morning write dear Sy!
I so very much enjoyed reading you this dismal morn.
You  brighten up the darkest day.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Margherita
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Eternity
6 posted 2005-04-23 12:15 PM


They are the hews in clouds above
They are the embers of your love
The very boundaries of your awe
The flickering of evermore


Oh my, this is enchanting!

Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
7 posted 2005-04-23 12:26 PM


"I strew them on my gardens path
And love the feel of aftermath"

~ As ye give, so may ye continue to receive!

Love & Firefly Light,
EA


Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2005-04-23 03:54 PM


Honeybunch
Thank you so much.

scorpio
Enjoyed your comment.

jwesley
Thanks for the read and comment.

miscellanea
And you enjoy your weekend.

Nancy
Thank you dear and hugs back.

Margherita
Love back,

Earth Angel
I knew you would say that.

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