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Bare The Moon And Heart |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
And a kiss but of clouds that brushed the sky to cover the naked breast of moon who had the moment before stood naked in front of me showing the round of full milk that leaked itself onto the black She has covered herself before the sun had his eyes above the rim of her bed and was to see too much instead she lay in a gauze of woven dreams protecting modesty of those who on sunday went to church and prayed that they might be whole some unable to understand through their own fog that flesh does not sin nor does the act of love become the key to hell when she in a swell of belly would give birth yet to the way spring seeps into earth slowly warm Too then there are the stars that would sing in mass the psalms of sentances too great for us to hold within the confines of our ears that we might breach the black and touch should we burn? or would the end of passing night bring us to the soul where we might lay inside the flesh contented to the prelude of another passing morn |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Great write Ron. believe in what your heart feels... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that they might be whole some unable to understand through their own fog that flesh does not sin nor does the act of love become the key to hell when she in a swell of belly would give birth yet to the way spring seeps into earth slowly warm *********************************** i love the way you look up and see  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat , Reflections of a mirrors reflection. Enjoyed |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Too then there are the stars that would sing in mass the psalms of sentances too great for us to hold within the confines of our ears that we might breach the black and touch" Even if we could hear what they say, I believe we would be unable to comprehend the meaning, and in a way, I have no desire to do so. Some things should remain mysterious, imo very well done, Cpat ----------ice/ford ><> |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh my goodness, this is gorgeous...so completely beautiful...makes me want to read it again and again...  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I sure enjoy everything you write Ron, lovely. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful !! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done as usual Sir. Always enjoy your work. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You dampen the mind with visions so grand. Expertly written gem Ron. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love that ending |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Always a marvelous write from you Sir Ron  Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
I ask in advance - Forgive me, I have returned to your poem time and time again to soak in the words. So many beautiful visions, but there remains a meaning that keeps playing in my mind, inspired from your poem… that of Mary carrying Christ.. the struggles that she had to face.. and the glory that He brings… Most likely I am not on the correct path with these thoughts, but my reply is with the best of intentions and sincere enjoyment of your poem… |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I think I like the way Aleta looked into your poem... and that alone is the wonder of you, and your ways of leaving the fullness behind. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deeply inspired write. Beautifully developed concepts. Love, Margherita |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
love this one, Chief~ and you~ **babygirL **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Tremendous write, Cpat! I couldn't tell you how this affected me if I spent a half-hour trying to put it into words! I enjoyed Aleta's interpretation, as well. miscellanea |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron Your title is just what you do in this poem so beautifully...thank you for the gift of being able to read you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
many thanks to all of you...for the time taken to read, and then to leave your words of encouragement ... obviously, I haven't haunted these halls much of late..and apologies..to all the wonderful poets I have read, when I can, and not taken the time myself to leave a few words.. so to everyone..I say.. thank you |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very heavy, full, permeating imagery an indulgence to read |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
then there are the stars that would sing in mass the psalms of sentances too great for us to hold within the confines of our ears that we might breach the black and touch'''' -- indeed breach the black... I came from the mountain |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Too then there are the stars that would sing in mass the psalms of sentances too great for us to hold within the confines of our ears that we might breach the black and touch perhaps they hold different meanings for different ears? Excellent work...amazing |
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