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On Nights Like Tonight...
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On Nights Like Tonight... |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Touched as the wind moves 'cross this vast land searched for an answer washed up on the sand Eyes tightly shut as I looked to the sky sometimes stars speak and sometimes they cry Wait for the moment as warm breeze embraces soothing your senses like velvety laces Souls float transparent on nights like tonight you can dance with an angel and never take flight Like loving and smiling, sunsets yet to be, unexpected embraces or a kiss you dont see On nights like tonight if you just close your eyes let go of your senses and take a short ride... Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh darn.....this is superb.... the sentiment, the flow....... everything.. Very well done! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Eyes tightly shut as I looked to the sky sometimes stars speak and sometimes they cry" Yes Sir. They speak to me and cry with me. Well done! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Very nice. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is beautiful and I am placing it into my library of favourites. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
or a long ride...it could be a long ride too right?  "Eyes tightly shut as I looked to the sky sometimes stars speak and sometimes they cry" yep, I like this part too...beautifully done  |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Gentle Spirit ~ You are so kind, thank you! Susan ~ I hear them too  Glad you enjoyed, thank you.Cloud 9 ~ Thank you Nightshade ~ Much thanks, I like the library SEA ~ The ride can be as long as you wish!! Im glad you enjoyed it girl, thank you.Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds good to me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely written...much enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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