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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Just me and my shadow, walking streets, seeing sign's, daydreaming in the sun. Credo cast in stone, take me now, take me tommorow, i'm indifferent, just marking time on the clock of life, listening to nostalgia free-wheelin' down the wind. Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Oh, I found this rather sad although well written. I can relate to the state of indifference but know too that it's a killer. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
just marking time on the clock of life, listening to nostalgia free-wheelin' down the wind. ------------------------------ Very well put GR, these lines stuck with me. Nicely done |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was so come-what-may, saying, whatever, respectfully...smooth sailing nonchalant |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This can be taken as sad or tra la la. I prefer the latter.  Nice write. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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