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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2005-04-21 10:43 PM



Even though your feeling ill today
don't you worry I shall be with you
anyway.

To take care and wipe your
runny nose. Wrap you in
blankets if you get cold

To make you soup when your
throat is sore. To tell you
I love you ever more.

No matter what condition your
in I shall be there with you
through anything.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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1 posted 2005-04-22 01:49 PM


I like your words Foxy because you seem to tie life to the meaning

I sometimes wonder whether that frightens others

Dave

Cloud 9
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2 posted 2005-04-22 02:04 PM


I love this.....I thought of my kids. Both just got over a cold but I think the littlest one has allergies.

have a great day

Foxyoasis
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3 posted 2005-04-22 03:58 PM


thank's guys

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-04-22 07:39 PM


that's sweet
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-04-23 08:05 PM


Enjoyed...James
miscellanea
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6 posted 2005-04-23 10:21 PM


and isn't that what love is all about?  This is just so sweet that I've got to tuck it away gently in my library.  Thank you!

         miscellanea

Foxyoasis
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7 posted 2005-04-23 11:34 PM


I"m glad you enjoyed it

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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