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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2005-04-21 05:38 PM


Inner Battles

I'm a confident person.
I believe that certain things
will be accomplished,
and they are...

most of the time.

I have a lot of doubts.
I find lots of reasons
within my mind
why my goals can't
be accomplished,
but I usually
achieve success
irregardless...

when I persevere.

Two kinds of people
in this world.
Those that stumble and
fall and then quit,
and those that stumble
and fall and then
become more
determined.

JamesLee
April21
2005

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yv
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1 posted 2005-04-21 05:42 PM


Ahh to have your inner strength, Friend.  My inner battles have plagued me in the past...however, I have come to grips with a lot of them with the inspiration of poetry.  Thank goodness I started writing when I was 8.  Otherwise my ways in dealing with turmoil would become tragedies upon tragedies.  Now I'm gushingly rambling.  Really loved this write.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-04-21 09:28 PM


very true

indeed!

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3 posted 2005-04-21 09:40 PM


Well done James. hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2005-04-21 10:54 PM


good!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


timothysangel1973
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5 posted 2005-04-22 12:37 PM


"Two kinds of people
in this world.
Those that stumble and
fall and then quit,
and those that stumble
and fall and then
become more
determined."

AMEN... well written and agreed by many of this I am sure....

Tima

DavePage
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6 posted 2005-04-22 04:14 PM


James

More than I think most

You know at times quitting is sanity and ego is hell

Dave

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